hume jinse pyaar hai
jinke liye humari jaan hai,
unse he humari pehchan hai
unke bina hum kya hai,
shayaad humne kabhi keha nahi
lekin unke bina jeena nahi,
hume hum se zyaada jaana
duniya se zyaada chaahna,
yehi unka kaam hai
aur yehi unki pehchan hai,
hume jinse pyaar hai
unka humpe bahut ehsaan hai
iv sent my main comments to u thru orkut..
ReplyDeletebut something else i wud like to add is that since u have written this from the heart...the person reading it feels the impact right in the heart :)
v nicely written
yep, it's very good i agree!
ReplyDeletesorry reeja...
ReplyDeletehaha no worries babe! i was just being extra. as long as kanu understands it, ya?
ReplyDeletebabe...thats heartfelt and amazing. Good job!
ReplyDeletegood luck for tomz...and dont stress!
hugs
superbly written!!!
ReplyDeletefrom heart to heart !!!
charu i must say who ever knows u close is one of the luckiest person.
im glad to have known u.
love u!!!
thank you my dearies!
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