Thursday, 15 June 2006

Attempt at shairi

I was sitting in the office waiting for my computer to be made available to me to start work. So i closed my eyes and got inspired (that is what I would like to think at least). And the following shayries are the results of that inspiration.

Woh aaya ghoode pe sawar,
pyar ka toufa leke
Woh aaya ghoode pe sawar,
pyar ka toufa leke
Dil to churaya he,
aapna toufa bhi vapass legaye
(he came riding a horse, with the gift of love,
he came riding a horse, with the gift of love
however although he stole my heart,
he took back his gift of love)

Hamara dil toodke aapko kya mila,
Dil to aapka he tha,
Aur aapne he tood diya
(what did you get from breaking my heart,
my heart was already yours,
and you only broke it)

Dushmano se to zakham milte he the
Dushmano se to zakham milte he the,
Magar apno ne bhi jab zakham diye,
Dil toota to toota,
Aaso bhi sookh gaye
(i used to get hurt by the enemies,
i used to get hurt by the enemies,
but when my own hurt me,
the heart did indeed break,
but the tears dried up as well)

Aapse kya shikayat kare,
shikayat to apno se karte hai,
Aapse kya shikayat kare
shikayat to apno se karte hai,
Magar jab apno ne he dhoka diya,
Hum shikayat kise kare
(how can i complain to you,
i only complain to ones close to me
how can i complain to you,
i only complain to ones close to me
but when the ones close betray,
whom do i complain to?)

Ok so they weren't all sad. The next one is kinda optimistic.

Pyar ki talaash mein hum kabhi yahan kabhi wahan gaye,
Magar jisko dhoondte hai woh na yahan na wahan hai.
Pyar ki talaash mein hum kabhi yahan kabhi wahan gaye,
Magar jisko dhoonte hai woh na yahan na wahan hai.
Jis din woh mil jaye,
hum yahan wahan ka rastha he bhool jaye
(i went here and there in search of love,
but the one who i was looking for did not come here or there
i went here and there in search of love,
but the one who i was looking for did not come here or there
the day i find him,
i will forget the route to here and there)

hmm so yea that was my attempt at shayri..

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

itna dard...??
dat is how most ppl start writing........when they ve pain in their hearts, but i do hope dat u dun write such stuff very often....wud rather u lead a happy life...tc babes...

Unknown said...

ya well richa dard to hai..guess that was the inspiration. but i ended off on an optimistic note. so umeed abhi bhi hai, umeed pe duniya kayam hai.
anyways the big question is, how did you find the shayri?

Anonymous said...

not bad, not bad even though u didn't write them for me!

Unknown said...

thanks reeja but i'm sure even you wouldn't want such poetry to be written for you...

Anonymous said...

hey prabhu!!
madancer ap mujhe yakken ho gaya hain ki tu mad hogayi hayi puri tarah se..lol
yaar tu bari different hain

Unknown said...

yaar priyanka why have i gone mad if i write shayri?